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Sunday, June 12, 2011

It could have been us

It could have been us
Holding hands, walking down a two way street,
Christmas, New Years, A kiss for every smile
It could have been us


It could have been us
Laying in the sand under a starry sky
Our laughter echoing through the night
It could have been us

A kiss in the rain, a hug for each tear
A chance to runaway with you
Picnic by the lake, dinner by the ocean with a glass of wine maybe 2
It could have been us


Even though I still love you,
Even though I miss you,
I realize you deserve the best
And not better or just good enough


So I will be at your wedding
And I will always pray for you
'Cause even though it could have been us
I am glad you found your soul mate.


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13 comments:

  1. iLike .... very similar to what I wrote yesterday...

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  2. Really nice. I can relate : )

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  3. wow!nice but err.... d part abt being at ur wedding err.... easier said than done tho :)




    *i believe dis is my 1st time here, wat hv u got in d fridge :))

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  4. Nice! I usually don't get past the first few lines when I stumble on a poem blog. But this is a breath of fresh air.Feels like it's straight from the heart. I really like it; I love the poem, and the blog design too.

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  5. hmmmm.... reli nice! nice concepts, nice expressions, nice caption...nice finishing... #thumbsup

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  6. really nice.. sad but i wouldn't be attending the wedding though

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  7. Two words ... Letting go. Someone said sometimes Love is revealed when you are able to let go...But its never that easy. iLike too.

    -LDP

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  8. aww Harry, I really, really like this. a lot easier said than done though.
    been there, done that, it hurts...

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  9. well I guess it wont hurt if, by then, you have also found your own 'soul mate'

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  10. Emmm, depending on the level of hurt I feel, i just might curse an ex who sends me this...especially if I'm not over him...lol.

    I just dont like the "its not you, its me" line jare.....anyways, gud thing the person in question found his/her soul mate so i guess there's no doubt as to having moved on happily

    I feel this though cos there really are times when you just dont love the other person enough and walking away would be the best course of action....still, it sucks to be at the recieving end :)

    Love the poem Harry

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  11. Thank you guys for the encouragement...:)

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  12. aaaawwwwhhhhh....*sniff* it only takes a Christ-like love to attend that wedding oo! u mstv rily moved on. :) aww harry, so proud of u! i lyk this.

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  13. Nice i rily like! Sad though but lovely words

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