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Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Another poem from down there...




I sit silent watching the stars in the sky,
Oh how they shine so brightly,
Piercing the darkness all around,
And somehow illuminating my soul.


I close my eyes taking a deep breath,
Tingling my senses with sensations I have never felt before,
I open my eyes looking into the darkness,
And somehow I see light


Looking past who I am, to the person I will be,
Looking past the pain, to the joy that comes after
Looking past my self to the One that holds me now and forever
I find hope, I find joy, I find peace


Selah


6 comments:

  1. ...and looking past the momentary troubles to the eternal glory which outweighs them all. :)
    Nice one! I really like the 3rd stanza. (Y)

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  2. tonikuyinu is absolutely correct about the 3rd stanza...

    beautiful pace and rhythm.

    Thank you for the invite to comment.
    @photograbber

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  3. I'm with Wale, the 3rd stanza is so spot on...nice one

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